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I Go To Pieces

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"Pathetic", he said as he stepped over the homeless man sitting outside his
office building. "Some people have no self respect."

As he rode the lift up to the 27th floor, he was seized by a ferocious
sneeze. Looking down into his handkerchief, he saw that his nose had fallen
off. The other people in the lift looked at him in horror. He covered the
gaping hole in his face and fled.

Outside. he phoned his doctor, but while he was speaking his tongue slipped
out of his mouth. It dropped to the ground and lay flopping uselessly on the

"This is just a nightmare," he thought. "I'll wake up soon."

He lit a cigarette to calm his nerves. He lost three fingers sparking his
lighter and when he flicked the ash his whole hand fell off. He hurried
away, shedding feet and legs as he tried to run, eventually collapsing in a
limbless heap in front of a smart office building.

He leant against the wall and his eyeballs trickled down his face and landed
in his lap.

"Pathetic," he heard someone say, as they stepped over him to enter the
office. "Some people have no self respect."

Story by DoghouseReilly

Posted by jc1000000

12th May 2009, 10:31  


jc1000000 says:

Really like this too. Reads a bit like a dali painting :)

12th May 2009, 15:22